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I've been busy with other things. See you tomorrow! --[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 16:25, 23 July 2015 (PDT)
 
 
 
== [[Moon, Hee Jin]] Why put crazy nonsense in the introduction? Not corrected yet! ==
 
 
 
I'm referring to:
 
 
 
Gil Ja Sa Eu (wife of Hyo Won Eu): "Our family was responsible for Hee Jin Moon, who passed away when he was on his way to witnessing activities. So I understand my husband, following Hee Jin Moon, needed to go to the spirit world to protect him.”
 
 
 
and:
 
 
 
Myung Hee Kim said that at the age of 14 Hee Jin was inspired to go and join in a summer witnessing campaign. He was travelling to the area by train. She was not with him. As the train approached the destination station in Seoul, Hee Jin leaned out of the train. The train was still traveling at some speed. His head hit a post or the side of a tunnel. He died on August 1st 1969. (see Today’s World magazine December 2011 page 7)
 
 
 
Don't you see that these are lies? When you want to put this in, you must do it in a different way. you cannot put this in the introduction because it is not factual at all.
 
:This text is still there. Rather than deleting it, why don't you try to use this information to write an objective introduction? The facts that the Eu family was responsible for Hee Jin, and that he got this deadly accident, are important.--[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 00:39, 24 July 2015 (PDT)
 
 
 
== [[Kim, Myung Hee]] - making internal links ==
 
 
 
Will you think of making internal links wherever appropriate? See the introduction of this page. You cannot make links in the infobox, but you can in the normal text of a page. Make links to other pages for each name or topic as it shows up the first time in a page. Also make redirects whenever necessary. --[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 00:51, 24 July 2015 (PDT)
 
 
 
== [[Moon, Sun Myung]] - 1965 10 10 - Seoul - Sun Myung Moon and his family at Kimpo Airport upon Moon's return to Korea after his first world tour ==
 
 
 
You added a link to this file on several pages. That's ok. However, you may consider the following: When we put every photo on which Moon appears on Moon's page, we get loads of pictures there, most of them telling little or nothing about Moon. Also think that there are timeline pages for Moon + UC. So for example this photo could be added as a link, or embedded photo (not sure yet what's the best) on that page. I'm very busy for several days with something else, so please make the changes in your best way and when i've time i'll look into this in more detail how this should be done on timeline pages.--[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 00:39, 26 July 2015 (PDT)
 
===Non-related===
 
: No code in 'Short biography' in the form! I corrected a few links you put there. When you do it gives a corrupted content in the infobox.--[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 00:39, 26 July 2015 (PDT)
 
 
 
== Please check and look at the result of all changes you made! ==
 
 
 
Apparently you're not always checking how a page looks after you made changes. I saw this a few times. It's apparent that on this page [[Private:1965 10 10 - Seoul Kimpo Airport - Sun Myung Moon - Hee Jin Moon - Hyo Jin Moon - Hak Ja Han - Ye Jin Moon - Won Pok Choi - Chin Tae Lee - Duk Sam Lee - In Jin Moon - Kwang Yul Yoo]] the storage url was not filled in correctly for the iframe.--[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 00:48, 26 July 2015 (PDT)
 
 
 
== Adding section heads if needed ==
 
 
 
On the page [[Moon, Hyun Jin]] you made the requested changes, but you forgot or did not know how to make a new section head. A section head is made like this <br><code><nowiki>==Articles==</nowiki></code>.
 
 
 
If you would wish a subsection of 'Articles' then the code is <br>
 
<code><nowiki>===Subsection Articles===</nowiki></code> --[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 00:57, 26 July 2015 (PDT)
 
 
 
== [[Schawaller, Wolfgang]] ==
 
 
 
The Own content section is for special own content. The introduction is also own content. I moved the text that you placed under the 'Own content' section to the introduction. --[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 14:33, 27 July 2015 (PDT)
 
 
 
== [[Private:1983 - New York - 100 day leadership and training program with David Hose - signature Chun Hwan Kwak]] ==
 
 
 
Something is wrong with how you wrote 'Grey, Kenneth, Darby, June, Hose, Daid' as a link in the infobox. Please correct. Not sure what you wanted to do here. Please check your own work after you made edits. --[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 14:41, 27 July 2015 (PDT)
 
 
 
== [[Corley, Jack]] ==
 
 
 
.... In recent years he has been...
 
 
 
In Short biography... This won't be very clear to someone who reads this in, say 30 years.
 

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150703 Changes in Iframe for private files

When you use the link 'Add private file' to make a private file, and you filled into the infobox form the storage url for the uploaded file, the head of the Iframe now automatically shows a link to that url.

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150703 Files in Iframes

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150703 Iframes templates improved

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150703 New CHI pages

150704 Changes in Private:page with databox

Initially i had made 1 + 9 categories for the private pages, assuming that these categories were hidden. But while in the search functions of the wiki private pages can only be found by users who are logged in, the category system is not so tightly closed. And every visitor of the site can find all the private pages by searching in the categories list and categories tree. They cannot see the private pages unless they are logged in, but they can see the titles of private pages.

It's not a big problem for our privacy, but i had to make some changes in how categories are attributed to private pages. You're more free to do so now.

Inevitably some help pages, diagrams and tutorials may still teach it the old way. But the form that you have to fill out gives the right instructions.

150704 Example of page with private photos collection

Private:Hyung Jin Moon photos collection shows this page. The four photos in it are all private.

See also how this photos collection page integrates with Moon, Hyung Jin#Photo gallery.--DivineCriticizer (talk) 04:08, 4 July 2015 (PDT)

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150819 Newly installed notification system

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