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*[http://www.nkeconwatch.com/2012/09/10/the-unification-church-in-the-dprk/ 2014 09 12 The Unification Church in the DPRK - An article that shows the ties that exist between the Unification Church, Moon, Sun Myung and North Korea] <sup>[[Private:198|pr198]]</sup>{{e|The description should not be part of the link. --[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 13:38, 17 September 2015 (MDT)}}
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*[http://www.nkeconwatch.com/2012/09/10/the-unification-church-in-the-dprk/ 2014 09 12 The Unification Church in the DPRK - An article that shows the ties that exist between the Unification Church, Moon, Sun Myung and North Korea] <sup>[[Private:198|pr198]]</sup>{{e|The description should not be part of the link. --[[User:DivineCriticizer|DivineCriticizer]] ([[User talk:DivineCriticizer|talk]]) 13:38, 17 September 2015 (MDT)}}{{e|Also: Look at the commas! Make this look better. Don't write: 'Moon, Sun Myung' but write 'Moon' or Sun Myung Moon. The commas are ugly in this sentence.}}
  
 
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  1. The description should not be part of the link. --DivineCriticizer (talk) 13:38, 17 September 2015 (MDT)

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  2. Also: Look at the commas! Make this look better. Don't write: 'Moon, Sun Myung' but write 'Moon' or Sun Myung Moon. The commas are ugly in this sentence.

    After you completed this edit please remove this reference higher up in the text. After you finished all edits on this page, also remove (1) the code {{esection}} at the bottom of the page, and (2) the category 'Edit needed...' mentioning your name.