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150703 Changes in Iframe for private files

When you use the link 'Add private file' to make a private file, and you filled into the infobox form the storage url for the uploaded file, the head of the Iframe now automatically shows a link to that url.

See for example: Private:Book Exposition of the Divine Principle

150703 Files in Iframes

Please whenever you add files in Iframes, if there is an url for a printable version of the web page, use that printable version. This is especially important for Wikipedia articles. Wikipedia articles can be uploaded as files in the public section.

150703 Iframes templates improved

To make sure that the originals of embedded files can be found by a reader, I've changed the templates that are used for embedding files.
See: Template:Iframe and Template:Iframes in table

150703 New CHI pages

150704 Changes in Private:page with databox

Initially i had made 1 + 9 categories for the private pages, assuming that these categories were hidden. But while in the search functions of the wiki private pages can only be found by users who are logged in, the category system is not so tightly closed. And every visitor of the site can find all the private pages by searching in the categories list and categories tree. They cannot see the private pages unless they are logged in, but they can see the titles of private pages.

It's not a big problem for our privacy, but i had to make some changes in how categories are attributed to private pages. You're more free to do so now.

Inevitably some help pages, diagrams and tutorials may still teach it the old way. But the form that you have to fill out gives the right instructions.

150704 Example of page with private photos collection

Private:Hyung Jin Moon photos collection shows this page. The four photos in it are all private.

See also how this photos collection page integrates with Moon, Hyung Jin#Photo gallery.--DivineCriticizer (talk) 04:08, 4 July 2015 (PDT)

150705 New CHI pages

150706 New CHI pages

150709 Help page for often recurring packages of codes

150711 Adding private pages, now entirely integrated into SMMA

150711 New CHI pages

150715 New sections in Model pages, sections, paragraphs

150717 New page for query of all biography pages

150719 - Updated page for model sections

150723 What to write in the introduction

150723 The use of quotes

150723 Don't fall into a routine mode

150726 What links, photos, etc to add to a page

150807 Private:Category network

150808 Categories and tags

150817 Enabling of gadgets

A new feature in SMMA:

This is a page where you get a good overview of all categories in SMMA.
- There is a section where you can enter a category and then get the parent categories
- There is a section where you see an alphabetic list of categories
- Then there are sections showing the main categories of SMMA
Click 'Category network' at the bottom of the 'navigation pane' in the left sidebar!
(The blue question marks have help instructions but are still invisible until sa got a new extension working.)

150819 Newly installed notification system

From now on you'll be getting notifications. This message is to test the system. Modify your settings in Preferences>Notifications. I added new information to the talk top. Will you please read it? After this you can remove this line. DC--DivineCriticizer (talk) 04:56, 19 August 2015 (PDT)

150820 Bug 'Mentions'

The 'Mentions' option in the new notification system doesn't work. It's not a big problem but better that you know. See Private:MediaWiki logbook#'Mentions' don't work --DivineCriticizer (talk) 04:59, 20 August 2015 (PDT)

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Good work today!

--DivineCriticizer (talk) 14:19, 20 July 2015 (PDT)

Choi, Soon Shil

I think it's a good idea when we copy the text used for the 'Short biography' in the infobox also for the introductory text of the page. I did this for this page to show how it looks. We don't need to use exactly the same words, for example, we can add references in the introduction but not in the 'Short biography.' Also we can use more text there. In this way the Short biography is used also to start writing an introduction to each biography page. --DivineCriticizer (talk) 14:15, 21 July 2015 (PDT)

Lee, Duk Sam

Duk Sam Lee was already married and left her husband.

Isn't this somewhat unclear? For what reason she left her husband? Text is in introduction of page and in 'Short biography.'--DivineCriticizer (talk) 14:20, 21 July 2015 (PDT)

Private:HWDYKYM - Moon with children from three different women

"Some elements on Sun Kil Choi and Myung Hee Kim, the 2 other women beside Hak Ja Han, with which Moon had a relationship and children, namely Sung Jin Moon and Hee Jin Moon."

This sentence sucks. Elements?

Beside means next to. Besides means apart from or and another thing.

Moon had a.... relationship... and children.... This is not good English because the word 'had' means two different things. Try to rephrase... --DivineCriticizer (talk) 14:28, 22 July 2015 (PDT)

Photo is missing in pdf. The text is nonsense this way

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Choi, Sun Kil - What's the meaning of this introduction?

What you want with all the superscripts and commentaries? What's the use of publishing a text that is full with questions? Who is supposed to edit all this if you don't do it when you enter this information?

Also, you're not formatting the superscripts in the right way. But that's a minor thing compared to throwing this confusion over readers.--DivineCriticizer (talk) 14:39, 22 July 2015 (PDT)

--DivineCriticizer (talk) 14:45, 22 July 2015 (PDT)

Moon, Hee Jin Why put crazy nonsense in the introduction?

I'm referring to:

Gil Ja Sa Eu (wife of Hyo Won Eu): "Our family was responsible for Hee Jin Moon, who passed away when he was on his way to witnessing activities. So I understand my husband, following Hee Jin Moon, needed to go to the spirit world to protect him.”

and:

Myung Hee Kim said that at the age of 14 Hee Jin was inspired to go and join in a summer witnessing campaign. He was travelling to the area by train. She was not with him. As the train approached the destination station in Seoul, Hee Jin leaned out of the train. The train was still traveling at some speed. His head hit a post or the side of a tunnel. He died on August 1st 1969. (see Today’s World magazine December 2011 page 7)

Don't you see that these are lies? When you want to put this in, you must do it in a different way. you cannot put this in the introduction because it is not factual at all.

Yesterday i said: Good job! Today i say: Very bad job!

I already spent one hour editing 10 percent of what you did. Please go over everything you did today and make corrections where needed. In this way i need much more time editing your work than i would need putting this in myself. Sorry, but i'm fed up with so many mistakes.

--DivineCriticizer (talk) 14:46, 22 July 2015 (PDT)